Only I find less comfort in only me
The likes of me ends the former me
Because I desire a brand-new-me
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Ms Patricia must love this marvellous tribute - everday you want a brand-new you, and there is a unique friend to create a new world for you - how wonderful!
‘…Because I desire a brand-new-me…’ Sure and needs editing and updating especially poets ‘…Shhh, the tides sing each to each’ Yeah music of mute imponderables…poets’ listen…as quickeared they’re Thanks Ma’am enjoying thru learning Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
That means the need is unique too, 'The dark days of winter gives way to a new Beginning For a fresh and pleasant time in life [so too dark days Are necessary for us to know the light] ', these lines complement the whole [series] of thoughts and feelings.10++
oh how mysterious ............... maybe i'm just not cut out for such poems. because this poem, to me, is oh how mysterious. but thanks for sharing. :)