Sunday, April 4, 2010

Your Uniqueness Meets My Need Comments

Rating: 5.0

Only I find less comfort in only me
The likes of me ends the former me
Because I desire a brand-new-me
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Bri Edwards 30 November 2013

oh how mysterious ............... maybe i'm just not cut out for such poems. because this poem, to me, is oh how mysterious. but thanks for sharing. :)

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Mark Nwagwu 16 April 2010

Ms Patricia must love this marvellous tribute - everday you want a brand-new you, and there is a unique friend to create a new world for you - how wonderful!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 16 April 2010

‘…Because I desire a brand-new-me…’ Sure and needs editing and updating especially poets ‘…Shhh, the tides sing each to each’ Yeah music of mute imponderables…poets’ listen…as quickeared they’re Thanks Ma’am enjoying thru learning Voted 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 April 2010

That means the need is unique too, 'The dark days of winter gives way to a new Beginning For a fresh and pleasant time in life [so too dark days Are necessary for us to know the light] ', these lines complement the whole [series] of thoughts and feelings.10++

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