Friday, October 8, 2021

Your Trace From Anyer To Ujung Kulon Comments

Rating: 4.6

I traced the road where you live and I didn't find the presence of your trace there
From Anyer to Ujung kulon, there were no remain about you
It's not even 1 year since the tsunami hit the north coast of Banten on there
It's not even 6 months pandemics yet to hit this country—like gold and diamond bijou
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Ayatullah Nurjati
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Regina Kirani A. 14 June 2023

Amazing!

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This poem really fascinated me! Full 5 Stars for all the precise and detailed renderings. Truly beautiful and very touching words.

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This poem really fascinated me! Full 5 Stars for all the precise and detailed renderings. Truly beautiful and very touching words.

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Nabila Khoirunissa 14 June 2023

good job! !

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revina addinda 14 June 2023

good job 🥳

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Ayatullah Nurjati 11 October 2021

Thank you Mrs. Sylvia for your compliment. I don't think I deserve the status of a poet. Some day if you come to Jakarta, Please Contact me and I will meet you

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 October 2021

2) I like this story poem very much, at the least I was born in Jakarta. Though residing in The Netherlands, I still know all the places'names you mentioned here. Very fascinating prose poem, dear Poet!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 October 2021

This poem truly mesmerizes me! 5 Stars full for all the precise and detailed rendering.Truly beautifully and very touching worded.

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