Monday, July 30, 2007

Your Tongue Comments

Rating: 2.8

I wish I could sit upon your tongue,
And saddle it to ride...
Like on horseback bared!
It moves so ever constantly.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Delilah Miller 30 July 2007

Gosh, I hope I'm not like that! Although I do ramble when I'm upset. You keep your poetry so light on the surface, it makes it seem like it shouldn; t be analyzed for deeper meaning. Lovely poem, as always! X's and O's

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Marci Made 30 July 2007

So, there is a tongue somewhere out there that 'you'd like to sit on? '...Some double meaning in there so I am leaving it alone..........Interesting write and a read that had me laughing......my imagination gets the best of me at times......marci.xo

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

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