Friday, August 14, 2020

Your Thoughts Are Your Mentors Comments

Rating: 5.0

They come without invitation,
Silently without any signs,
No one can stop them either,
They just make their way.
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M. Asim Nehal
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You feel elated and your mind gets enchanted, Your words start to fall in place. Like the steps of a ballet dancer, And you start to scale the sky Its all the magic of thoughts, elated, powerful and truthful. 10

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Michael Jack 14 August 2020

Exclusive work You feel elated and your mind gets enchanted, Your words start to fall in place. Like the steps of a ballet dancer, And you start to scale the sky like eagles. Your creativity reaches its zenith, Your heart melts with candles, Your soul balloons with inspirational air, Your poem starts plummetingin heart.

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Darren Jkoeryo 14 August 2020

Your creativity reaches its zenith, Your heart melts with candles, Your soul balloons with inspirational air, Your poem starts plummeting in heart. SUPERB! ! ! ! 10+

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

You feel elated and your mind gets enchanted, Your words start to fall in place. Like the steps of a ballet dancer, And you start to scale the sky like eagles.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

You feel elated and your mind gets enchanted, Your words start to fall in place. Like the steps of a ballet dancer, And you start to scale the sky like eagles. NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE SIRRR JI

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 14 August 2020

You feel elated and your mind gets enchanted, Your words start to fall in place. Like the steps of a ballet dancer, And you start to scale the sky like eagles. RGDS SIRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

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Mahtab Bangalee 14 August 2020

They are your thoughts And they are your mentors....yeah exactly; thoughtful and philosophical poem Knowing self is great guide on this earth

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