Thursday, August 23, 2012

Your The Apple Of My Eye Comments

Rating: 4.5

Mum why is there war?
Because men believe in what they say
So they fight for what is right
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Kaila George
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Chinedu Dike 09 December 2014

A nice narrative piece on conversation between a lovely inquisitive child and a doting mum. I like the articulation of the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Valerie Dohren 27 August 2012

So many questions children ask, and you have answered these beautifully. Well written.

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Unwritten Soul 27 August 2012

Mum why why people write poetry? Because this is the way we share loves over countries and because this is where we learn from other from [people like this poet, Kaila share her great wisdom for us Apple of the day haha_Unwritten Soul

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Kee Thampi 23 August 2012

these words are from golden hand written for smell beauty of God

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Knight Fizzstorm 23 August 2012

The quest in never ending. Commendable poem.

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Kaila George

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