Sunday, March 15, 2015

Your Tears Were Lies Comments

Rating: 5.0

One who twittered like birds!
One who sang like winds!
One who flied like clouds!
One who rained like showers!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Kumarmani Mahakul 15 March 2015

He was an umbrella. With a bitter smile on tears still wonderfully you have presented your poem. Nice.10.

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Hazel Durham 15 March 2015

The truth laid bare and so beautifully composed!

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Khalid Saifullah 15 March 2015

A bitter truth...................................! ! ! ! ! ................10

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