Your Sweet Presence Comments

This poem commemorates beautiful thoughts and feeling at the time of your meeting in her sweet presence. Wonderfully done!

Glad to read your nice romantic poem, my friend! Congratulations for selecting yours as member poem today!

Music, when soft voices die, Vibrates in the memory; Odours, when sweet violets sicken, Live within the sense they quicken. Rose leaves, when the rose is dead, Are heap'd for the belovèd's bed; And so thy thoughts, when thou art gone, Love itself shall slumber on.............Shelley Congrats your lovely poem broght back another lovely poem by by Shelley. A sweet presnce is never forgotten and it remains in the memory for ever.

Lovely poem Sadiq.. Congratulations

Tragically beautiful. Congratulations on Poem Of The Day, Sadiqullah!

Nicely presented....

Beautiful words expressing love, congratulations on poem of the day

a sweet poem of memorable and imaginative loving words? .............wonderfully written

Such a lovely poem you have written, Sadiqullah.... Congrats for being selected. Perfect 10+++++++

These memories! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Mr Khan, your sweet words!

‘That I was in love with you/Not love/But that I liked you/Though I loved you’ Dilemma poet is in… Unilateral Love as no say from the other partner… Finally Poet concludes, And the memories/Of your sweet presence’ He loves to stay with the memory…when ‘no more’ this no more is not cleared by the poet…well Poets loves to keep many thing under the sleeves of emotion…let the readers think as they like…. Thanks Sir 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

oh lovely verses.................10+

this is written in a sweet manner..very nice..naizz

What a wonderful poem! It's touching, and sweet in a way that's not over-done. Lovely.

your sweet presence is an amazing poem......wanting the readers more of this story...10!

memories written sweet of the presense of a beauty in her absence...subtly romantic...sparkling teeth... why appear twice? ten grade