Thursday, January 29, 2009

Your Sweet Kiss, Rests On My, Window, Sill-O. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Was i sad, and sudden, sent home...
Without a kiss, upon my lips.

Without, a long, good bye, my darling-missed kiss...
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Michael Gale
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Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

this is beautiful indeed.. i mean darlings miss... kiss.. so very passionate and musical.... Hope the lady didn't hissed..... nice lines... hey by the way i just out of curiosity turned to the last page of your poems column to see how many u v written.. gosh that s lot u v written! ! ! i just started, may be at your age.. who know i might touch 1000 too huh! ! ! .. always help writing poems isnt it? ... with lves shan

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Fading Heart 13 February 2009

Great poem in the poems that you have this one is the best :)

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