Friday, May 29, 2015

Your Steering Left Me Punctured! Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dear friend
your driving is superb
Its stamped in designs in your wonderful car.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 March 2016

Superb, A nice composition indeed. Thanks.

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Mithilesh Yadav 10 February 2016

Grrrt penned........... A good comment necessary for society

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Kavya . 23 July 2015

hahahahah...truly hilarious poem...this also reminds me of one of my relative who drives this way and whole time i sit and pray next to him while he drives....lol

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 27 June 2015

Truly, happenings like this arouse emotions and thoughts.A good description.

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Lyn Paul 12 June 2015

Your poem is superb! ! ! So funny Dear Geetha and I think we have all felt this as a passenger on many occasions. ..I just feel the need of coolant to my heart... LOL for sure. x

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Shahzia Batool 08 June 2015

Made me religious :) Graphics based on such Realism-I'm glad I read this poem Geetha...

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Bharati Nayak 03 June 2015

Awestruck by the beautiful lines and wondered how powerful was the drive to pen such a nice poem.

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Akhtar Jawad 02 June 2015

Enjoyed this beautiful poem and I can guess who is the driver.

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Rajagopalan Kumar 02 June 2015

Realistic description of a rash driver; Good rendering..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 June 2015

Were you steering on wheels or stirred my heart? .......Beautiful description. Nicely envisioned....a comparision between car driving and heart beating. Well done, read and enjoyed.

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Valsa George 31 May 2015

But every time you put brake my heart just jumps out and pumps in back. This is exactly what I too feel while travelling in a vehicle, especially in a car that moves in break neck speed! The more the speed, the more scary the applying of break becomes! Enjoyed your roller coaster ride....lol

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Mr. M Jamal 29 May 2015

Your speed is superb like flying in air Only the traffic can put a break to your speed. Enjoyed reading it. :)

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Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

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