Your Smile, The Vivid Constellation Of My Cosmos Comments

Aha a splendid sparkling poem on d beauty of smile.

REALY NICE AND HEART TOUCHI

This is written beautifully and seems to be straight from the heart truly amazing

Its amazing...I love it completely

Maybe when you wrote this you was in love very hard, as the love in writing and lines are really good to read again and again...why i like this poem..because you have something i like there...constellation and cosmos...it match my soul..it's magical to us to see now u use for your nice poem..that really work! _Unwritten Soul

well written beautifl words

A well formed poem that flows well and has a good use of language. This is probably your most confident write yet. Good work.

Absolutely wonderful! I like that it isn't angsty but it isn't old, you know? It is gorgeous! Your use of words is awesome!

its very touching and brings more feeling when you use nature i love it

I loved it your writing is very heartfelt.

That's so sweet.... I loved this poem from the title.. all the lines in fact all the words are heartfelt... I loved the last verse.. Wow! ! You can't outshine my love's smile... thats a beautiful, lovely poem indeed... I loved it... Keep ua spirits high :)

woo, that was romantic! reading this, I feel surrounded by cosmos and nestling

I personaly felt desire to read this poem, because of its title.I think you should consider and labour in your titles as much as you do in the contant of your poems, after all that's where it all starts...love your work, will keep reading!

It leaves a very beautiful feeling

This is an absolutely beautiful poem.

That was a truly beautiful poem

This is a wonderful poem, so far the poems i have read tell me you are a magnificent poet

You are the brightest star of the constellation! Spontaneous flow.

A lovely poem - the only chanage I would make Sharad, would be to use the word `adorned` rather than `ornated` `in the third line of your first verse.

Juneja, your poems are very different from other poets. I am impressed from your expressions and impressions. I have read your 3 poems while reading I was thinking in my mind that I am there and every thing is going on in front of me. Wording you are using in your poems is amazing. I am your big fan. Pls add me as a friend. Keep it up.