The splendor of a sunset that energizes my emotions
The radiance of a rose that refreshes the core of my being
The tranquil tenderness of a dazzling dancing dripping dew drop
The pure magnificence of the midnight moon massaging my mood
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Smile majestically and artistically motivates mind. Greater than gravity, this gives goodness and splendor in life. Love sprinkles fragrance like rose. Beautifully penned poem is shared here is interesting.10
The splendor of the poem and the beautiful comments just hold my breath.Thanks to poet and commentators.
Beautiful, beautiful. I can imagine how beautiful that smile must be because you have described it in amazing imagery. Dazzling dancing dripping dew drop...awesome.
A smile can heal another's heart when shared in passing. Great imagery throughout your poem enhancing it's meaning. Great poem! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
What A Poet Is Howard Simon (A gratitude by Akhtar Jawad) What a poet is Howard Simon! when he writes a poem on smile, my lips start dancing, and I say to myself once more romancing, when he writes a poem on tears, I start recollecting my lost years, my eyes down pour the shining pearls. When he writes a poem on love, the old man starts looking at the girls. A magician is he makes me juvenile. His poems move and with his poems my heart, my body, my soul all move like light straws, and I find myself in his poetic claws, like a bird who is so much used to a cage, that doors though open, she never flies back to her nest. Her she gets love, peace and rest. Poems of Howard Simon are the mental foods, delicious, hygienic and cooked nicely. With his poems I cry, with his poem I smile. What a poet is Howard Simon!
Most magnificent are your comments. Wow! Thanks for your excellent affirmation. Such lofty lines!
A smile does these things, a gesture so simple, so pure can change everyone who see's path.
Frank James Ryan perhaps suggested the right put regarding the comma issue.
Beautiful lines make the reader fresh by its essence of life infinite. Such smile is our passion to be bathed but quiet rare we get the opportunity to be witnessed. Thanks for sharing. Live long and live well and write more......
The smile that fills the whole being with pure bliss- -the poem is such a beautiful write.
Brilliant write with inspired lines that soar with wings of the beauty of your words!
How I could read these incredible words, every single day! Truly amazing Howard. As Allotey has said...'Filled with that which makes you want to read more.....
Superb imagescaping, and magnificent metaphoric play, Howard...Last line the best...And if I could be so bold as to make 1 grammatical suggestion on this pen-gem...A comma in between gravity and more....PERFECTION! ~FjR~
I love it.. Filled with that which makes you want to read more. Good one there
Sunset or sunrise it does not matter sun smiles and we smile continuously. Tender love brings smile for us. Love is like greater gravity and this motivates us. An interesting poem is beautifully penned...10