O breathe a word
or two of fire
smile as if those words
should burn me
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Powerful! A deep and touching write that clearly shows your talent and great feelings magically filtered through this thought provoking write! 10+++ I really enjoy it and I hope you keep it up! Please, keep enriching the Poetry World with more of your inspirational works! If time permits, please, check my latest posted poem titled: Poetic Justice and I hope you like it and enjoy! Regards from New York City
Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around. beautiful sir well done
hats off man...hats off....jst grt....superb.....such a grt poem on such a simple yet romantic topic.....go on......
I sealed my poem with my smile...so it never down for you but smile forever :) _SOul
a smile can enchant many. As in your poem turn into sadness. A lovely write with good imagery.
A smile has a power to hypnotize and enchant, you have beautifully expressed such a smile with a sad ending! Superb write!
Wow! Thousand ships will get drowned if they see this smile. Exaggerated beauty........Simply fabulous.10 +++
A radiant smile can do wonders to those around you. A smile is just a frown turned upside down. It takes more wrinkles to frown than to smile. When you smiling th whole world smiles with you. keep smiling and keep penning. Enjoyed.
Woh! I am thrilled at 66