Tuesday, August 6, 2013

Your Smile Comments

Rating: 3.5

Your smile

captured my attention
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Heather Burns
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 09 July 2016

Love is associated with smile that opens mind to realize and this tiny speaks many things in few lines about mystery of love and smile. Wonderful this poem is.10

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Valsa George 30 June 2015

How the embroidered name has 'filled a vacancy'! Quite sweet! Five simple lines can convey so much!

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Stephen Katona 18 March 2015

Such apparent simplicity hides a wealth of meaning. After reading this wonderful poem several times I have grown to love this poem. It reminds us to remember the powerful of our smiles, helps us imagine our smiles embroidering our names on the hearts of those who receive them and know how important it is to fill those vacant spaces. It takes great skill to express so much in so few words.

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Lyn Paul 15 February 2015

Fabulous just what a smile can do, even if it is not for love. thank you

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Akhtar Jawad 21 October 2014

A sweet smile is an arrow of cupid.

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Ramesh Rai 27 September 2014

I love every smile. Thanks for share. Regards.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 15 September 2014

Love floats on each word so nice

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Bri Edwards 02 January 2014

yes, short AND sweet. a true story or a good imaginaiton? i wonder. i found you in dinesh nair's new years poem. i, coincidentally, just deposited SMILES and Smile, two shorties, into my poem list. thanks for sharing. ;) bri :)

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Maria C. Pires Costa 11 August 2013

Brief but powerful thread as the effect of that Smile upon your heart! :) Love it. Good Luck!

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Khairul Ahsan 09 August 2013

Excellent expression of how smile can capture a heart (not everybody's though) !

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Jayachandran Chakrapany 08 August 2013

With a few words beautifully narrated the true essence of pure romance.jk

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Shahzia Batool 07 August 2013

a delicate thought Ms. Burns...gripping in effect! ! !

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Geetha Jayakumar 07 August 2013

Wow..Fantastic write....Smile has wonderful effect..So true...Loved reading it...

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Neela Nath Das 06 August 2013

Smile has wonderful effect on us! Expression is so beautiful.Never could imagine.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 06 August 2013

Smile filling a blank space on heart by embroidering. Beautifully put in the poem. Thank you.

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