Wednesday, November 4, 2009

Your Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your smile comforts me when I feel sad....
The sadness turns to happiness...
Your smile kisses mine when we are in love....
The kiss becomes tender in my heart....
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Monica Rose
COMMENTS
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 25 January 2010

Your poems will make me fall in love with you..: -) It's really good.

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Jake Shelvey 28 December 2009

A smile can bring new life into the world...a smile can knock a man off his feet. My favourite poem of yours, Monica.

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John Knight 06 November 2009

Hi Monica - lovely poem - lovely smile - lovely lady! Nobody else has scored so I will open the score with a MAX! SMILING is so so important in the UK we have a National Smile Week. You describe so beautifully all the things a smile can do. Comfort - Make Happy - Tenderise - Warm - Attract. I love the concept of two smiles kissing 'through space'. Just like an electronic key can open a car 'From a Distance'. A smile makes everyone more beautiful and loveable. 'I can't even describe how much I love you - Your smile is everything I desire - All I want is you! '. Your poem is making us all smile Monica Rose - making us all more lovely - making us all love you. Your poems - like you are lovely - welcome to Poemhunters. Love in Poetry - JOHN.

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Chang Yi Huang 04 November 2009

What a sweet love poem :) No one can deny that smile is such a wonderful thing which ususually fires the passion of love ^^

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Dev Poet 04 November 2009

Bravo! that is a 9.5 in my book...lol I really enjoyed that

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