Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Your Smile Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your smile begs the stars
to light up my being
with enamel brightness
firmly toothed
...
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mark nwagwu
COMMENTS

Fine imagery and with depth Dancing 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Indira Babbellapati 16 December 2008

short sweet n smiling, your smile brought smile to my face

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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

My smile--and you break dance wowwww! ! ! ! ! ! and then the enamel brightness whose mine or yours? whatever +++++10 regards anjali (read mine Thanatos)

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Kesav Easwaran 16 December 2008

a short but deep poem...there is more than a smile morethan a dance inside this...10

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

Break dancing after a love triumph? ? Wow......its kool Mark! !

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C T Heart 16 December 2008

captivating smile with a same like of this poem...a 10/10

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