Saturday, September 12, 2009

Your Smile Comments

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Your smile for a while
Touched broken wings
Of iron illusion
Your care for sure
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Walterrean Salley 13 August 2012

A smile works wonders. How beautiful.

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Mubeen Sadhika 15 September 2009

your narration is beautiful. nicely penned.

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Kuji Soliman 14 September 2009

this is lovely Ahmad....you expressed much in such small sentences :)

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Rajaram Ramachandran 14 September 2009

A lovely smile can bring peace to broken hearts as you say.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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