Your Smile Comments

Wow! It reads even better the second time! Elegantly and excellently expressed!

Added to my poem list. Thanks Nosheen!

Simply sublime! Wow!

your smile begins from the heart and spreads across your face like glittery ripples sweeping over the river in its warmth I melt till I'm no more myself. - - - - - - - - An absolutely lovely poem- - - - Love is viewed both in worldly and spiritual sense- - - - -It starts with individual but spreads to merge with universal as we can find love in nature - - in the sunshine, on the ripples of river water, evening breeze of sea shore and the individual melts into that warm feeling.

I want to dissolve into that smile Nosheen till I am no more. I love the picture you paint especially the second verse -the breeze loitering along the seashore. What a great word loitering especially in this context. So so uplifting! ! !

And this is the God's most precious gift to the mankind......A smile can lift and en-light anybody. It emanates from the heart and touches the heart, a crafty and inspiring poem, Love it..10+++++

Nosheen, this is magnificent. I have no idea what the inspiration is or was, but the power of that smile...it reminds me of mother and child. A fantastic poem.

This is a woman's idealization of a man, it parallels what I wrote about a man's idealization of a woman in my comments on the other poems. I hope I did not overstate my POV because I have been moved by your poems of love and desire. We share this faith in the best of human emotion and desire, not its debasement or casual abuse, but its fulfillment in a spiritual wholeness of body and soul. YES!

This poem holds me! ! ! ! What beautiful soothing images flow from line to line- - - - as the morning sunshine, taking the world in its arms- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -has anybody ever penned a better pair of lines than this? I just melt every time I read this............. girl, you have definitely staked your place in poetry with this! ! ! ! ! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++ and on my fav list so I can read this beauty again and again

It is a beautiful poem on smile having nice penmanship. Smile is the key of the heart and door of the love. I appreciate this poem. Thank you dear Nosheen for posting this valuable poem....10

A beautiful poem on smile............................................................................

And within such admiring eyes is awakened an end to a journey. A clear fresh day like those in distant Childhood. Such carefree beauty and a reawakening of a heart in blissful serenity.

Lovely. I wish the whole world had that kind of smile. I guess we all must do our part.

What a lovely poem....! The mesmerizing effect of a smile from someone whom you love. This smile seems to have the beauty and aroma of a smiling flower and the warmth and sweetness of a baby to its mother! 10+++++

such smile such blessing, a beautiful poem.

What a beautiful poem. Must be a very lucky celebrity. You are one of the best poets ever I believe and nothing can change that belief.