Your smile invites our
Thoughts to relax within your sight,
Troubles to melt in your path,
Senses to mesmerize in your eyes,
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Rich flow of thoughts embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful portrayal of the essence and intricacies of loved-one's smile written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.
Your smile helps us to Follow our passion of discovery, Seek our desire in priceless treasury, Your smile changes our Loneliness to togetherness, Darkness to Lightness, simply beautiful with a passing graphic of the smiling woman.... just fine and gives real inner comfort for the reader. you are spreading smiles all over in this sad world dear poet. thank you. tony
Bursting with a beauty that is both refreshing and rich! Well done my friend!
sweet and nice i love the piece powerful and truthful thanks for sharing
Smile and laughter bring healing to the heart. Nice work.
Your comment means a lot for me Thank you Mr. Louis for reading.
Your smile is single and individual subject where as object appears to be universal. This reflects the contradiction arising out of evolution. A mesmerizing sketch has been drawn by your ink where fountain of love is springing perpetually. Thanks for sharing.