Saturday, December 19, 2015

Your Smile Comments

Rating: 4.7

Your smile invites our
Thoughts to relax within your sight,
Troubles to melt in your path,
Senses to mesmerize in your eyes,
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Abderrahmane Dakir
COMMENTS
Ramesh Rai 21 September 2018

Your smile is single and individual subject where as object appears to be universal. This reflects the contradiction arising out of evolution. A mesmerizing sketch has been drawn by your ink where fountain of love is springing perpetually. Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 20 February 2018

Rich flow of thoughts embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful portrayal of the essence and intricacies of loved-one's smile written with clarity of thought and mind. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 22 February 2018

Thanks for reading. I appreciate it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 June 2017

Your smile helps us to Follow our passion of discovery, Seek our desire in priceless treasury, Your smile changes our Loneliness to togetherness, Darkness to Lightness, simply beautiful with a passing graphic of the smiling woman.... just fine and gives real inner comfort for the reader. you are spreading smiles all over in this sad world dear poet. thank you. tony

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Thank you Dr.Tony for your amazing review.

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Mohammad Skati 04 February 2016

It is a true and wonderful poem. I loved it. Thanks.

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Thank you for your wonderful review.

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Bursting with a beauty that is both refreshing and rich! Well done my friend!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 03 February 2016

Thank for your bursting comment.

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Ernest Makuakua 25 January 2016

sweet and nice i love the piece powerful and truthful thanks for sharing

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Abderrahmane Dakir 27 January 2016

Thank you for your truthful comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2016

Smile and laughter bring healing to the heart. Nice work.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 23 January 2016

Your comment means a lot for me Thank you Mr. Louis for reading.

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M Asim Nehal 18 January 2016

Awesome poem, written with great passion.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 23 January 2016

Thank you Mr. Mohammed for your awesome comment.

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Mihaela Pirjol 05 January 2016

A passionate poem written with a fervent heart.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 05 January 2016

Your comment is so sweet. Thank you fro reading.

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Heenal Vora 01 January 2016

Well constructed one👌👌

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 January 2016

Your comment is exquisite.

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Driss Ezzireg 31 December 2015

Nicely penned, Si Abderramane!

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Abderrahmane Dakir 04 January 2016

Thank you so much for your comment and your time.

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