Monday, November 27, 2017

Your Smile - 02 (Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

The smile on your lips

Are the last asylum of my heart-
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Subhas Chandra Chakra
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Rajendra Rout 09 March 2018

I really enjoy this haiku.thanku sir for sharing this lovely haiku

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Malabika Ray Choudhury 15 February 2018

Lovely Haiku! I like the image - paints colours on my dreams. Beautiful!

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Thanks dear Malabika Ma'am for your kindness in reading one of my poems and for the great remarks that would encourage me ever to go on this strange yet beautiful path of poetry. Sorry for such a delayed response.

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Sonali Parida 28 November 2017

Ah..the last asylum, a lovely abode, love this poem so much. 10+++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 27 November 2017

Last asylum.Is there any little space for me sir.Nice one.

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