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this poem was simple in how it was written, but it has emotion in it and i can tell it must hae helped you realease when you wrote it, so good job! I hope that you keep writing!

very good poem. liked the good use of vocabulary in it..im also impressed with the meaning of the message in it aswell. good job. i love it when people put their feelings into words because to me music or poetry is the best way to put them