Tuesday, June 10, 2008

Your Shadow Comments

Rating: 5.0

Can’t make the dreaming stop
It spells the truth out right
For in the cold of night
I wish your shadow to return
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Alison Dunn
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Sandra Fowler 27 May 2009

How terrible it would be not to have those dreams that fall like shadows on the soul. An eloquent write. Ten, of course. Warmest regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 21 September 2008

You share your regret with openness and a natural feel for rhythm in this poem about lost love. You're right. The shadows of memory seem to take for ever to be released. Perhaps this poem will hasten the process and allow you to open a new door. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Alison Dunn

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