Thursday, January 27, 2011

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Life is not complete if not led.
Words are meaningless if not heard,
The cry for battle is not fierce if not fought
A thief remains innocent if not caught.
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Adeleke Leke
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Anne Jones 24 July 2011

Adeleke, this was beautifully written. My favorite line is 'the cry for battle is not fierce of not faught.' Well done! Thank you for commenting on my poem. It was nice to hear some feedback.

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Adeleke Leke

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suru-lere, eko
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