Monday, March 17, 2008

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Rating: 5.0

I haven't heard from you in forever it seems
You've even begun to disappear from my dreams
But all of a sudden you're back in my life
And the pain is again cutting through me like a knife
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Dwayne Bailey 02 October 2008

Love can be tough and most of us have had our hearts broken to. Feeling and emotions can be both a blessing and a curse at times. Beautiful poem and so full of emotion. So much pain from one so young. A 10 my friend. Dwayne

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Mark Chavez 16 July 2008

Everything you write about has so much emotion...lacy ur a true genius at your age

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Jessica Taylor 23 April 2008

it seems as if you and i have the same writing material good poem and its alot like some that i write *~Jess~*

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