Friday, February 12, 2016

Your Religion And Your Nation Both Are Mighty Comments

Rating: 4.5

When nature decides to destroy a nation,
it injects fears and frustrations in the people,
they start feeling insecure,
they are afraid of even their own shadows.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Uzefa Rashida M.a 13 February 2016

An inspiring and encouraging poem for citizens of a country where people are ill treated on the basis of their religion.

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Uzefa Rashida M.a 13 February 2016

An inspiring and an encouraging poem for people of a country where citizens are treated on the basis of their religion. The words hold true but partly. the meaning and message seems to be incomplete. The poet could add another line or two.

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Akhtar Jawad 13 February 2016

I think message is complete. Fundamentalism and terror are weapons of weak persons. Even guerrilla warfare is fought by the weaker nations. Even then I invite you to suggest what may be the lines that should be added in this poem. You are a very good poetess and I hope you will please suggest.

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Kelly Kurt 12 February 2016

Tis not nature that builds or destroys nations, tis men and their human nature. Can you imagine a planet where all nations and men united as one? Where is that finish line?

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Akhtar Jawad 12 February 2016

Start line are our children, and I believe a proper socialization and education can change the human nature. Finish line is infinity.

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