Sunday, June 9, 2013

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When the seeds of light
swing in the lap of tide
on the beautiful chest of an
ocean and you are in a mood
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Yasmin Khan 09 June 2013

Lie is sometimes so dazzling that it blurs the vision but the ones who have insight can expose it and conquer it. One bright star illuminates the dark horizon and life is not totally a lie, it's a wonderful truth too. I was wondering if you'd use rhymes but perhaps it's your choice to go like this and is equally good.

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Somanathan Iyer 09 June 2013

One cannot run away from clutches of time. The whispering blue sky is our own concious. Beautifully written.

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