You asked if my poetic skills
would be what an emetic fills
namely a basin of foul smelling
regurgitate, there is no telling
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Herbert, I really hate the first four lines of your poem...but then it gets better. That image hangs around, though, and detracts from the rest. Raynette
poetic excellence comes from learning how others write their poetry and getting to know how one is born different writes differently but yet able to appreciate the difference in others the rain comes down in so many ways
So do I Raynette, it was in response to a comment one of my 'fans' made about my poems. No names mentioned. H