Saturday, July 16, 2011

Your Presence Comments

Rating: 2.7

THIS reality in which YOU live is more beautiful than
dreams, I am content, it would seem you can work
wonders with your presence, when you’re there the
sun shines, when you speak, you open my heart, when
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Margaret Alice
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Bri Edwards 19 November 2014

well, i found a comment you left (on another poet's poem years ago) . and now i am running out of time tonight and my wife just passed the doorway and said time to go to bed darling which translates to GO TO BED, you big dummy! . i read you bio for a couple of minutes or more, then scrolled through it for about half a minute more till i FINALLY reached the end. good luck with the allergy and the weight-watcher in your family; or is he just trying to help you eat more 'nutritious' food? it sounds, in this poem, as though you have found someone/something special. congratulations, if you still have him/her/it. good night from california. thanks for sharing. :) bri

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