Tuesday, August 14, 2018

Your Phenomenal Self Comments

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I watched,
Helplessly,
As It broke my heart
My heart,
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Susan Williams 14 August 2018

But it's embers burn, / Kindled, when you gave a gift, / A gift, your precious heart, / A heart, beaming with sacred life, / A life, of restored dreams / / dreams, that burns with fire / A 🔥 fire, that illuminates with love, / A love, spew'd abroad all hearts====== I found it poetic and rhythmic how the last word became the first word of the following line. Well done!

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Dave Dafes 19 March 2019

Thanks Susan for the lovely comment.. Your words touched my heart

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