Friday, September 29, 2006

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i will take you to my world...
there where no tears and moans...
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hazem al jaber
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Mimi Mata 13 September 2008

Hazem, Words such as this are not to be taken for granted, every woman desires a man to remember her scent and for him to then feel as if he were on...His greatest most memorable 'high'...Absolutely intoxicating. With All My Respect, Mimi C. Mata

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Chandra Ramsahoi 12 July 2007

I AM TOUCHED BY YOUR WORDS, A BEAUTIFUL POEM THAT TRIGGERS ONE'S IMAGINATION.

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Oliver Roberts 29 September 2006

Wow Hazem - this is hauntingly beautiful. I also like your style of leaving an ellipsis '...' at the end of your lines - very effective in portraying lingering thought.

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