Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Your Old Poems Comments

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On the sides of the road
they're sleeping shutter down
on this cold dead's abode
alphabets rusty brown!
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Pradip Chattopadhyay
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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines...... Walk once more the dead's abode show a light dust the page read the lines on the road your poems that would never age! Very true said, when we dust few pages which we wrote, we recollect them, which we had already forgotten along with the passage of time. As our thoughts keeps on changing our poems too keeps on changing. Loved reading it. Beautiful presentation.

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Geetha Jayakumar 31 October 2014

Beautiful poem with fantastic lines...... Walk once more the dead's abode show a light dust the page read the lines on the road your poems that would never age! Very true said, when we dust few pages which we wrote, we recollect them, which we had already forgotten along with the passage of time. As our thoughts keeps on changing our poems too keeps on changing. Loved reading it. Beautiful presentation.

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Valsa George 25 October 2014

Some poems we wrote sometime ago, may be to relieve our mind of some burning pain or to release some pent up feelings, we might in course of time forget! Read them once again and it will still be a novel experience! Enjoyed this beautiful poem!

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