Tuesday, May 27, 2008

Your Name In Your Names Comments

Rating: 3.0

There you are,
Your first name caught in the energy of the next,
Your second name holding the most height of all,
Your middle name atop the centerpiece of a nothingness,
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Stephen Carey
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Greenwolfe 1962 28 May 2008

Now this is quite unique. It is also more common in the modern forms I find so disappointing. So I may not be fair to this poem. Its clarity is lacking because I cannot reconcile the second and middle names. This may be my undoing, but I am a reader and I may not be the last to not see this reconcillation.Beyond thismystery, Is the basic truth that I seek here. There must be one, but if I cannot find it. It is not there. Still, it is well conceived artistically and must be accorded due creative merit. I shall do so by giving it the greatest benefit I can. A 6..

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