Friday, October 12, 2012

Your Name In The Sky Comments

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I was looking at the night
Then I saw your name hanging so bright
It was written in gold
With Ink of bliss wrapping it so bold
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Shania K. Younce 16 September 2014

This is a lovely poem. You need to maybe check the spelling of particular words. I really enjoyed reading this poem. You have a very nice flow of rhythmic pitter patter in your poetry. Bien!

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