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In deep breath
I draw your name
Inside
To fill every corner
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God's name gives us such feelings that tears turn into laughter. Deep breath of life draws his name only. Serene light we feel with full joy. Very interestingly drafted nice devotional poem is shared here is excellent one.10
So smooth and serene... a perfect coach for such a beautiful theme. You have that magic touch- -that ability to reach out and touch your readers' lives and souls. A spirituality that whispers softly of eternal things. Well done, my friend. 10++++++++++++++++++++++++
such fresh and pure serene thoughts! ! thank you for sharing Poet! ! 10+++!
Reading your poem, I have undergone all that 'that name', whose ever it is, has done to you!
Thank you Madathil Rajendran Nair for your nice comment.A poem is really appreciated when it evokes same feelings in the reader.
Very good expression of devotion...beautiful wordings.. thanks for.sharing...
It is really a delight to see your valuable comments on my poem..Thank you very much, Sir.
Calm and compose...beautiful vivid n soft poem Mam...Really loved it...
excellent..and well done really heart touching poem...thanks or sharing
A beautiful spiritual write. You have put your feelings in a very heart-touching way. The bond between man n God is the one to be cherished. The depth n strength of your adoration for god is deeply felt by the reader.
Thank you Nosheen Irfan for taking time to read my poem and putting your valuable feedback.
Your poem is a lovely prayer to the Almighty......all our passions are born as per His will and He knows what is best for us. Thanks for sharing your lovely lines..
Thank you Kishore Kumar Das for your nice comment.Yes, I believe in God and believ that all my actions are guided by Him.
favorite lines: Melts into stillness I become calm Full, happy and content Like a cool, serene night......................God does this for you? you have god as one of the topics for this poem. of course, i need to remind myself, poets do not always write about themselves OR write nonfiction. a smooth poem. i don't think of myself as happy, but i do have enjoyable moments, and generally am content with life, though i think i have lived long enough and 'should' make way for others! but there are problems with my way of thinking, AND i am curious to see what is around the next corner in my life, like WHO will be the next u.s. president. sorry to talk so much about myself! ! gotta go. i've been called to supper! bri :)
Thank you Bri Edwards for your nice comment.You loved my poem is what gives me the satisfaction of a writer.Yes god is one of my topic.It depends on individual how he views life and God, source of all life.I believe God is supreme creator and we derive our energy from Supreme creator.The human love is also a part of supreme love.Yes, we can not but be affected by our surroundings.But how to keep calm in this situation depends on us.
An introspective and inspirational poem with a spiritual base reposing full faith in Him and His benevolence. Thanks for sharing.
I am really grateful to you for finding your support as a valuable reviewer of my poems.Thank you so much.
Excellent poem......with some wonderful lines My pains into flower The madness and rush The cacophony and chaos That surround me Melts into stillness I become calm
A feeling of peace captures the heart and mind by totally surrendering to Him. Cool drop.
A beautiful love poem with a fine ending. Great rhythm to your verse too. Tom Billsborough
Thank you so much for your appreciation of my poems.It is so encouraging.
Filling God's name in each breath of life is purely fortune. This is exact duty and service. Having love for God brings light and calmness in mind. Nice poem is shared...10
Thank you for your wonderful comment.Yes I feel God's kindness on me.
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As you make My days and night My joy and ecstasy You turn My tears into laughter My pains into flower.. your name is written in my heart....... lovely expressions.. thank u dear Bharati