Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Your Name Comments

Rating: 5.0

In my short coffee-pot
the small bubbles
emitting vapour
whisper your name.
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Joseph S. Josephides
COMMENTS
Duh Huh 29 July 2009

Wow, i want to grow up to write like you. I love your imagination and this poem is refreshingly original. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. wow again :)

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Kathryn Tyler King 29 September 2008

I love coffee and to stir your emotions with drinking a cup and reference to someone you miss is enticing.

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Mencita Monoï Angel Carmen 28 September 2008

everything one day evaporates.in one way or another.... but how nicely written...

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Theresa Moore 25 September 2008

A poem filled with potency…I especially like the analogy the aroma of coffee to the remembrance of someone who is valued friend.

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coca cola 24 September 2008

O; wow your like soo amazing! xD It's so.. Different, but in a good wayy <3 there was just so much Passion, I loved it xD

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Tanny Quin 23 September 2008

Very interesting and clever, as you were drinking the name of this person with intenseness, yet you said 'Your name rises, to set it doesn't want you' I had a sense you might not like this person by that statement, but then you said, 'endless journey depart but already return. Which made me think instead you love this person and their name. The ending of your poem portrays a special love, 'The distance is long between chest and brain'! ! ! What a statement that could have several interpetations. I had to read it over three times! ! ! ! how passionate you are with these words. Excellent! ! In Depth perception! ! ! ! Deep! What a cup of coffee! ! Enjoyed reading! ! Many Smiles Phebe

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Donna Nimmo 23 September 2008

A very lovely poem and such passion. I could feel it too. Hugs, Donna

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Ency Bearis 23 September 2008

a great verses...to express the love... Ency Bearis

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Egi David Perdana 23 September 2008

name is a identity, this a good poem

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Fay Slimm 22 September 2008

A beautiful love poem and centred around the name of the beloved. Well penned.

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Elida Cumani 22 September 2008

wonderful, i love this writing it seems really that we have the same tastes

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Stephanie Fiddy 15 September 2008

Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! :) I love your choice of words with your poems. So artically written!

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Li Away 15 September 2008

But let me come to myself; let me rush to anticipate and fill the small pot up to its lips, before the last dropp is disappeared and your name is kidnapped and lost simply beautiful, loved it. coming to rescue urself in this pot before it all disappears, before u r left self-entagled, self-rescued by a name! beautiful

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Joseph S. Josephides

Joseph S. Josephides

Larnaca, CYPRUS
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