In my short coffee-pot
the small bubbles
emitting vapour
whisper your name.
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I love coffee and to stir your emotions with drinking a cup and reference to someone you miss is enticing.
everything one day evaporates.in one way or another.... but how nicely written...
A poem filled with potency…I especially like the analogy the aroma of coffee to the remembrance of someone who is valued friend.
O; wow your like soo amazing! xD It's so.. Different, but in a good wayy <3 there was just so much Passion, I loved it xD
Very interesting and clever, as you were drinking the name of this person with intenseness, yet you said 'Your name rises, to set it doesn't want you' I had a sense you might not like this person by that statement, but then you said, 'endless journey depart but already return. Which made me think instead you love this person and their name. The ending of your poem portrays a special love, 'The distance is long between chest and brain'! ! ! What a statement that could have several interpetations. I had to read it over three times! ! ! ! how passionate you are with these words. Excellent! ! In Depth perception! ! ! ! Deep! What a cup of coffee! ! Enjoyed reading! ! Many Smiles Phebe
A very lovely poem and such passion. I could feel it too. Hugs, Donna
A beautiful love poem and centred around the name of the beloved. Well penned.
wonderful, i love this writing it seems really that we have the same tastes
Very nice! ! ! ! ! ! :) I love your choice of words with your poems. So artically written!
But let me come to myself; let me rush to anticipate and fill the small pot up to its lips, before the last dropp is disappeared and your name is kidnapped and lost simply beautiful, loved it. coming to rescue urself in this pot before it all disappears, before u r left self-entagled, self-rescued by a name! beautiful
Wow, i want to grow up to write like you. I love your imagination and this poem is refreshingly original. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. wow again :)