Saturday, August 16, 2008

Your Name Comments

Rating: 4.0

I wrote your name in the sky,
but the wind blew it away.
I wrote your name in the sand,
but the waves washed it away.
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Jasmine Vazan
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Vanessa Hernandez 03 November 2008

forward forward forward forward.......

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Greenwolfe 1962 29 August 2008

This was very good Jasmine. It was short like a poem should be, and the title was a good one. I loved the finish. Very nice! GW62

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Samantha Guinen 16 August 2008

YOur good thats so true

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