Monday, August 10, 2009

Your My Addiction Comments

Rating: 5.0

your kiss now a memory
still lingering on my lips
eyes so mysterious
I'm lost under your gaze
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Saane Pahulu
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Sam Yang 19 August 2009

Very beautiful poem. I loved it. Keep up the good work.10+++ =D

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Tyrone Wingfield 17 August 2009

your fist love is always the deepest, stays with you the longest, and cuts the deepest, this is a really good poem

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Saane Pahulu

Saane Pahulu

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