Thursday, March 20, 2008
.your Mouth Comments
Rating: ★2.5
You have a sensual mouth
its fullness defining your
bold outlook on life and
concurring with the
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Ivan Donn Carswell
20 March 2008
A fine poem Yuri, it draws the reader on with an innocence and subtle intrigue. Perhaps 'it's' rather than 'their' in S1, L2 - not that it matters, the meaning is clear. Most enjoyable. Rgds, Ivan
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7/30/2025 12:14:23 AM # 1.0.0
Ah the warmth, (and beauty) , of the unspoken thought which lives for you alone. Touchimg.