Monday, June 9, 2014

Your Mother, Your Friend Comments

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My elder bother was born in nineteen thirty nine,
And I was born in nineteen forty five,
He often faced funny words of mine,
He is dead and I am alive.
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Khalida Bano Ali 14 February 2017

What he brought could be repaired and mended, What I brought may bring the end, To moon and planets you are ascended, And the earth, your mother, your friend! ..........................great message.

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Khalid Saifullah 04 January 2015

A beautiful poem on mother earth.....................10

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Sarmad Mirza 16 June 2014

soo nice lovng one..

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Neela Nath Das 13 June 2014

A poem of wisdom...............

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Valsa George 10 June 2014

Yes, the Earth is our Mother and friend..... We shouldn't allow it to be polluted and destroyed by atom bombs and nuclear weapons.... The Hiroshima still remains a black mark in human history! (The argument between the two brothers is interesting!)

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