Standing still I am
with patience
Like a tree
Though
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Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth from the heart. An insightful piece of poetry written with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Chingu.
punctuation MIGHT help this. i'm not convinced of it. bri : (
Thanks for reading and leaving a very honest feedback..and sorry for any inconvenience caused by my insufficient knowledge of punctuations....
A good start with a nice poem, Chingu Stone. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.