Saturday, July 7, 2007

Your Mistake Comments

Rating: 4.5

There's a crime,
You put me through,
I ran out of time,
And this I cannot undo.
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Dan Jensen
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Rodney Epperson 07 July 2007

You painted a very clear picture. It feels like a place I've been into a time or two. Great Job!

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