Sunday, November 4, 2012

Your Mistake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Don't preach to me about success as if you knew it all,
Assume you have all answers then soon coming is your fall

It's through mistakes and pain that our lessons are learned,
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Bri Edwards 22 January 2020

I LIKE THE FLOW AND RHYMING, but not the message. it sounds like you are not self-assured, OR you are TOO self-assured. bri :)

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Siddartha Montik 28 December 2016

This is exact. So perfectly told as if I heard it in Voice.! ! so True in every inch of letter and so deep! ! LOVED it so much as if I felt I am talking to myself! ! thank you Poet! ! Thank you! ! 10+++++++++++! ! !

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