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Good write written from the heart not a text box never change your style

Yah this is good poetry

It is a rather sad poem. I can feel your pain. I hope you are doing okay, but this is a phenomenal poem. Good job.

tear jerker, so much emotion i love it! !

mistakes are the footprints of lovers. we're gonna learn that. nice poem.

There's allot of relation here. I def had this happen a time or two.

The true words from from a loving heart.Like it.

I love it! ! ! deffienitly explains some of us

this poem is awesome

Good one there. Take note of the advice of your friend below and it will do you more good than harm, thank you

We are not the same persons this year as last; nor are those we love. It is a happy chance if we, changing, continue to love a changed person. W. Somerset Maugham Nice Work

We are not the same persons this year as last; nor are those we love. It is a happy chance if we, changing, continue to love a changed person. W. Somerset Maugham Nice work

You write from your hear, . Beatifull.

YEAQH REAL IT IS THE HISTORY..I HEARD THE ARTMOSPHERE OF IT...IT A GOOD ONE FOR A REMEMBRANCE OF HER

Young man, you definitely write with your heart. Now here is the next execise you need to do for yourself. Go to the library and starting reading the classic poets, and see if you can develop a similar style. If you dislike their poetry, go with more recent poets. But I will tell you very honestly, you must attend an English class, more than one, and agree to follow my instructions. If not, your poetry will never go further. It's like wishing to be a racecar driver, if you know you have it, then you must practice correct? Then practice your writing and spelling, and keep writing from your heart. That's what poets do best! ! Real poet's that is! ! Thank-you for listening my new friend.