Saturday, January 5, 2019

Your Missing Piece Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was your missing puzzle piece
It was missing for a while
but you always went on gingerly
kissing life with a smile
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Aqua Flower
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Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2019

Kissing life! ! ! ! ! Affairs! Love and Life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 January 2019

I cite one of your sad lines: .....You always wanted more.......That´s very sad to know, this is no true love, this love we don´t need, we never need! Sheer poetry created with grand excellence. This poem deserves a 100/100 marks.

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Aqua Flower 06 January 2019

The dilemma in this particular poem expresses two sides of a relationship. I appreciate your comments and other comments on my poetry! Thank you!

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