Your Mind's Ocean Comments

allen, i can't claim to understand this poem. i did read it 3 or 4 times, at first trying to understand it and finally just trying to enjoy the sound of it. i like the repetition of phrases and the change in rhyming words paired with operation. i think maybe you wrote it while in YOUR mind's ocean, so it seems a bit dreamlike; and i don't claim to understand dreams either! did you mean to write dropp [sic] or drop? thanks for sharing and thanks for your latest comment. bri

I really like the idea of the mind as an ocean. People use words like deep and shallow, but you've proved there's much more to it than that with this poem. The word vast springs to mind. Hope to read more of your work soon.

these sound like the lyrics of a song, if you could work out music for it i think it would sound great! if you don't mine, could i try to myself?

MY WIFE SAYS IM CRABBY SO I MUST HAVE SOME CRABS IN MY MINDS OCEAN. GREAT CONCEPT 10 POINTER