Your Memory Is Never Gone Comments

Lingered in the air Blown by the wind into the unknown To merge with the breeze Your tears became water That nourished the earth....endearing expression. A magnificent poem.

Addition: 5 stars full for this gem and to My Favourites. Thank you so much for sharing.

Your poem can also be used for school education, dear Nudershada.Full of subjects to be pondered.

Excellently worded, loveliest rendered, dear Nudershada (beautiful name!) and I have enjoyed this poem full of brilliance. Footprints! I love that word.5 Stars and to my Fav.

Lovely lines loaded with lessons for living. Impregnated with imagination and inspiration!

Beautifully expressed. Very comforting and assuring for all of us treading the path of life but sometimes unable to recognize our own footprints! Thanks for sharing.

nice words- To become rain That nourished life To give hope to spring You are never gone Your memory is all here Alive and living 10++++

The smell or your breath Lingered in the air Blown by the wind into the unknown To merge with the breeze.......your tears, rain, live. memories.. a vry fine poem dear poetess Nudershade.. thank u.. tony

Someone who is lost is not lost for ever. In the falling rains, comforting spring season, cool breeze and in all the lovely forms of nature, that someone is remembered. What an wonderful idea has been the theme of this poem!

A nice imagination beautifully converted in a lovely poem.

This is my first visit to your work, and I am immediately transfixed by the power of your imagery. I especially enjoy how in this piece you seamlessly blend the physical and the metaphysical, extending the same metaphoric language for both. I look forward to acquainting myself further with your work.

Memories of life! ! With the muse of the past. Thanks for sharing.

Beautifully crafted. Beautiful poem.

A lost love? This poem is both sad and hopeful. May you never forget. :)

Beautiful poem Nudershada. Thank you for sharing Mario Odekerken