Your Memory Comments

p2'Eventually, it sits and settles amidst the raining petals inside my head'; and the startling break through moment explanation 'flabbergasted by the flash of the first warm rays of the sun of spring.' Superb Poetry.

p1The title 'Your Memory', reduced to delicate breath as a butterfly flutters 'back and forth between my lungs' in a cold snap season 'where there's a blast of winter and no trace of the bright glow of autumn' is exquisite imagery; extended into the wonderfully written