Your memory touches my mind
like soft breeze
touches a lake
and makes ripples
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Wonderful! Beautiful imagery. Lovely diction. The memory is lightened by beautiful descriptions and similes. The memory still gyres in poet's mind that makes it live.
a floating feather fall and touch the ground, like first raindrop touches the hopeful dry-land, and it touches like a hand of a loved one very fine expressions of love. thank u der poet. tony
Very nice