To you she is perfection with nothing to lose or gain
With her things are elaborate when they started out plain
Her scent and her beauty drifts its way into your dreams
Eventually you wake and your world weakens at the seams
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marvelous work.with brilliant rhyme flowing and wonderful vision although i ve not seen that film. great job val~nb
i absolutely adore 'The Notebook' and your poem perfectly portrays the strong love Noah and Ally felt for each other. i really like how you have told their story throughout the film from falling in love, loosing each other and finally finding each other once again that led to loving internally. your writing has a beautiful flow and rhyme which makes it more of a delight to read. i had a smile every time you made a perfect remark of a scene such as the boat ride which you also followed with a wonderful description. keep writing.