Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Your Memories Comments

Rating: 4.8

When the slow day,
awakening me,
from memories of you,
that haunt me,
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Sahar Sahar
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Afzal Shauq 03 July 2010

so romantic and soul kissing poem with rich and meaningful idea with... very much melodic way of expression.. loved it

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Hari Khabrani 26 April 2010

In Love it happens, as if.....

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 January 2010

feel your presence, in my shadows, like your soul, coming down, from the clouds, ....................... heart ruffles by memorabilia shadow by reality yet haunts deep cloud deciphers gleams of love soul when sieves by the glory, most passionate by art of love as when curved over the rune of reminiscence, ingeniously wrought by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Akram Saqib 21 October 2009

lovely poem with lot of feelings

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Ejaz Khan 20 October 2009

It seems you have collected sweet memories, a great thing, now these awesome memories are entertaining you is even greater and so is this write, a beautiful, soft write! 10 without any hesitation.

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Ejaz Khan 20 October 2009

It seems you have collected sweet memories, a great thing, now these awesome memories are entertaining you is even greater and so is this write, a beautiful, soft write!

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Saadat Tahir 12 October 2009

did it thrice... its beautiful and very well written....meaningful and done to perfection with added dimensions and levels... superb write cheers talking of love...one shd never forget callimachus When Love and Wine Inspire If sober, and inclin'd to sport, To you, my fair one, I resort; The still-forbidden bliss to prove, Accuse me then, and blame my love. But if to rashness I incline, Accuse me not, but blame the wine: When Love and Wine at once inspire, What mortal can control his fire. Of late I came, I know not how, Embrac'd my fair, and kiss'd her too; It might be wrong; I feel no shame, And, for the bliss, will bear the blame. Callimachus (c.310-240 B.C.)

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soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....

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soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....

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soft thoughts, warm images nicely penned.....

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Catrina Heart 07 October 2009

well expressed thoughts and feelings...loved it!

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Seema Chowdhury 06 October 2009

what a beautiful love poem. well composed. see some of my poems too. take care

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