You are my Queen
The air I breathe
A particle I need
A need that brings me
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Very intense poem....I am sure you will suceed in captivating your queen
hey.... you got what you wanted Naidz said it in such an exuberant and touching return post great job...an you are good at it it was fun to read GW 62's post too
Hi Eyan, I never interfere with quarreling love. Good luck for both!
WOW... i get on this site to read poetry because im not very good at writing it and i love all of yours. thank you for inviting me to read. :)
Eyan you HAVE TO write me a poem like this because it's beautiful!
i can really see how much the person meant to you.. nice poem.. love it...
This is so meaningful and thoughtful and filled with love. I should think it will break the ice! Great work Eyan. 10 from me.
This is a beautiful poem, same title as one of mine, lol! I really like the flow.
A nice poem well written and the emotions you show should make your love come to you. If not then consider it Lol to be bad. If one can't impress his or her love how can he impress others. Congrats on a nice write.
Commendable work...Check 4th line down...should be bring(s) . FjR '09
They always have to fight for some unknown reason..lol..May be when they fight they are letting you know you are the one...don't hold me to it...iip thanks you..
wow....... perfect poem, ♥ i really like it and enjoy reading it. 10/10
i dont know if my words were already written here, but as i read this today, i'll leave again my words..this is sophisticated, so nice and if this is a thing, this is very tidy..i like this poem...ian, i observed, ur previous poems are very excellent...hope the more it is excellent at this present..i like ur works ian...