Thursday, April 9, 2009

...Your Meaning To Me Comments

Rating: 4.3

You are my Queen
The air I breathe
A particle I need
A need that brings me
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Eyan Desir
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Lady Grace 12 March 2010

i dont know if my words were already written here, but as i read this today, i'll leave again my words..this is sophisticated, so nice and if this is a thing, this is very tidy..i like this poem...ian, i observed, ur previous poems are very excellent...hope the more it is excellent at this present..i like ur works ian...

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Catrina Heart 27 July 2009

lovely written poem...heartfelt one! ! ! 10+++

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Lalitha iyer 21 April 2009

When you meet me, then be Silent......that is enough......

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djean Whitney 20 April 2009

There is alot of difrent ways of looking at it -good work!

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Naidz Ladia 18 April 2009

this is nice eyan..thanks..

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Sandra Martyres 17 April 2009

Very intense poem....I am sure you will suceed in captivating your queen

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Saadat Tahir 17 April 2009

hey.... you got what you wanted Naidz said it in such an exuberant and touching return post great job...an you are good at it it was fun to read GW 62's post too

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Schrijfidee Coray 16 April 2009

Hi Eyan, I never interfere with quarreling love. Good luck for both!

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Heather Cooper 13 April 2009

WOW... i get on this site to read poetry because im not very good at writing it and i love all of yours. thank you for inviting me to read. :)

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Eyan you HAVE TO write me a poem like this because it's beautiful!

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Julia Pascual 13 April 2009

i can really see how much the person meant to you.. nice poem.. love it...

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This is so meaningful and thoughtful and filled with love. I should think it will break the ice! Great work Eyan. 10 from me.

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Joscelyn Alderdice 11 April 2009

This is a beautiful poem, same title as one of mine, lol! I really like the flow.

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Mohammed Albalushi 11 April 2009

i feel love tune in your poem, lovely poem dear poet

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nature 360 11 April 2009

A nice poem well written and the emotions you show should make your love come to you. If not then consider it Lol to be bad. If one can't impress his or her love how can he impress others. Congrats on a nice write.

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Allan Macli Borges 11 April 2009

very romantic and deep...10

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Commendable work...Check 4th line down...should be bring(s) . FjR '09

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Kranthi Pothineni 10 April 2009

Very sweet and expressive. Lovely work with nice flow.

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James Mclain 10 April 2009

They always have to fight for some unknown reason..lol..May be when they fight they are letting you know you are the one...don't hold me to it...iip thanks you..

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OuSs@Ma Samouna 10 April 2009

wow....... perfect poem, ♥ i really like it and enjoy reading it. 10/10

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